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Dream Sailing |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT 
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I sea upon each crest rise the stars within my reach To me the wake of what lies, horizons without a beach I'm free combing endless ties sailing such dreams that teach Fear is a blindness, heart is the cure. - C. Belville 02 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
the rhyme scheme of this is excellent Craig! Love the theme! |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Thank you Dixie, scheming is not one of my better suits and this seems ... unended, but I wanted to see if I could get the effect of an unfinished dream .... ... kind of like no music to dancing. *S xx |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
hmmmm curious, like a dream wish i could poem every dream . . . now there's a dream s.a.g. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Well written rhyming, and a pleasant dream theme, Craig. Enjoyed the cresting waves imagery. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Craig  upon each crest rise the stars within my reach ooooh just imagining a wave so tall it reaches up that far. i love the sea. and your thoughts, come back soon! |
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anwaarhassan Member
since 2003-07-09
Posts 181Menifee, CA |
Both rhyming scheme and content are excellent and somewhat unique... Anwaar |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Craig I don't quite get what you are saying here, but I wouldn't want to see a horizon with no beach. Really like the setup and style, but tell me what you mean. K? Sandra |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Sandra - have you ever found yourself lost in thought? caught up in a dream with your eyes wide open? That's how I have been feeling as of late, tossing and churning in my thoughts .... ... but every thought holds something, good or bad, special or indifferent, it depends on how we make use of it. And each thought feels endless in this venture. Does that help you? If not, try these! oxoxoxoxoxoxox |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Arthur - may such dreams be touched by thy hands KC - the imagery is only in my mind, the beauty is with your eyes. Thank you my friend. Gem - You bring warm smiles through the chilling rain .... ... ALWAYS!!!~ XOXOX |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Anwaar - sorry, thank you for the read. I just try to be different. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Keep that sail....this is most beautiful....as well as peaceful...hugssss you...  Lauren~ Through the darkness |
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