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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-07-09 01:35 AM



Exposed


in a flash
you saw
the truth
revealed
I am
a tender
petal in
the corner

"if you keep looking back, you are going to miss your whole life" Unknown

© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-07-09 01:50 AM


Doesn't take special optics to see that....just eyes tuned to reality.

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passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2003-07-09 04:09 AM


it happens just like that, don't it?
timothysangel1973
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Never close enough
3 posted 2003-07-14 02:04 AM


I missed this one...how?

Glad I decided to look around tonight...great write lady!

passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-07-14 04:03 AM


glad it came back up!
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5 posted 2003-07-14 10:34 AM


flash of bulb reveals
tender petal holds the key
to beauty of rose


littlewing
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6 posted 2003-07-14 01:17 PM


God . . . indeed you are - as most of seem to be . . .
Beautiful
xxoo

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Deep in the heart
7 posted 2003-07-14 03:20 PM


a tender petal
in the corner of my heart
encouraging love

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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