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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-07-09 01:30 AM


Vacancy

what good
is talent
when you
have no
audience
I practice
nightly
wondering if
my voice
carries out
the window
flying on
winds wings
to you
can you
hear me
in your
silence


"if you keep looking back, you are going to miss your whole life" Unknown

© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-07-09 01:33 AM


  




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RavenEye
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since 2003-05-02
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2 posted 2003-07-09 01:33 AM


Hi,

I like this very much!! I hear your voice loud and clear!! Your talent is surely not wasted!!

Very nice read!!

RavenEye

Keep faith, hold your dreams in your palm of your hand as you reach for your goals!

passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-07-09 04:11 AM


when I get silence, yes
Larry C
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4 posted 2003-07-09 10:55 AM


Or is it that the audience you need...left? Because you know we're eager to listen.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Aenimal
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5 posted 2003-07-09 10:02 PM


You already know how much i adore this and how much I adore you but I'll say it again anyway..I adore ya h
skyshine
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6 posted 2003-07-09 11:00 PM


I can hear you very well! If someone can't don't bother with them....some people are permanently tuned out.

~Elizabeth

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

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