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freespirit
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since 2003-07-03
Posts 24
USA

0 posted 2003-07-08 06:45 PM





Sweet are your red lips
succulent like juice from the vine.

Soft is your touch
comforting and warm like sunshine.

Deep are your eyes of green,
that I fall into with each glance.

Strong are your arms
I surround myself with every chance.

Open is your loving heart
that will stand the test of time.

Faithful is your soul
that will always be mine.



"FREEDOM" Sir William  Wallace (1270-1305, Scottish Patriot) Famous last word  before he was hanged.


[This message has been edited by freespirit (07-09-2003 12:27 AM).]

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altoladybj
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since 2003-06-24
Posts 79
Pennsylvania
1 posted 2003-07-08 07:45 PM


freespirit, I really enjoyed your poem, thanks for sharing.

Beverly

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2003-07-09 05:33 AM


Fantastic...James
Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665

3 posted 2003-07-09 07:55 AM


lovely poem straight from the golden heart of you...

Thank you...

Goldenrose.


freespirit
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since 2003-07-03
Posts 24
USA
4 posted 2003-07-09 03:08 PM


Thanks everyone, you are too kind!
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