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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2003-07-08 03:54 PM



~*~
My mind is blank,
There's naught to say,
I know not where to go.
I'm lost inside,
My pretty head,
And have no words to sow!
~*~

© Copyright 2003 Linda L. Dowd - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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1 posted 2003-07-08 04:18 PM


some blank pages
are sure a lot fuller
than others

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2003-07-08 04:26 PM


Midnitesun

EA


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3 posted 2003-07-08 04:27 PM


a blank mind is the devils playground you know..want to go play? LOL


enjoyed this...and enjoyed the things not said in it... but understood.


Patricia
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4 posted 2003-07-08 04:43 PM


Enjoyed this one.  

I often go blank...I think it is my way of shutting down when I have too much to deal with in my life.  Then things get sorted...and well, I have something to say.

Patricia

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5 posted 2003-07-08 05:02 PM


Captain ~

Shuckkums! I just had a thought come to mind and now my mind is no longer blank!--and I was just about to go play with you!--perhaps the next time my mind becomes the devil's playground?

Luvs 'n hugs,
EA

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6 posted 2003-07-08 05:03 PM


Patricia ~

That's it exactly!

Lovin' hugs,
Linda

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7 posted 2003-07-08 05:55 PM


You make me think ...  the moment your mind is blank is perfect for there is room for beauty to roam ...
Love, Margherita

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8 posted 2003-07-08 06:07 PM


Have you lost your mind or is it just empty? I can help you either way

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

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9 posted 2003-07-08 08:11 PM


Hey you kids if you is a goin' playin' I want to come.My mind is blank most of the time if that counts. HeeHee.
See Ya A Silly Poet By The Name
of
Bon-Bon

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10 posted 2003-07-08 08:19 PM


Earth Angel - enter is I into your corpulscles. Phiffffff, go the blanks, and to fill the void comes the poet of you. My magic spell is cast, and now expect to see one of your fabulous romantic writings.

BC

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11 posted 2003-07-08 08:34 PM


Oh, sweet thing, some days are like that. But, it's okay, I liked your writing of nothing.  

Huggles, Marti

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12 posted 2003-07-08 09:14 PM


Linda - Join the club for Mind Baldness!! lol. I hear ya!! Chris

"Said you'd give me light...
...but you never told me about the fire."

~Stevie Nicks~  
      

    

Earth Angel
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13 posted 2003-07-08 09:41 PM


Margherita ~

I certainly do hope that you are correct in your assumption that something "beautiful" will come in to fill the void in my mind!

Huggums,
Linda

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14 posted 2003-07-08 09:41 PM


Wind ~

Perhaps you could kindly help me with both problems!

Luvs 'n hugs,
EA

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15 posted 2003-07-08 09:43 PM


Bon-Bon ~

Yeppers! We "blankettes" are gonna play--and you are most welcome to join in the blankety blank blanks! LOL  

Love & Laughter,
Linda

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16 posted 2003-07-08 09:46 PM


BC ~

Oh, my! Where do I start?!?--perhaps with the concept of you filling my corpuscles? Now there's a thought! LOL Next, you banishing the blanks and then you bringing the romantic poet in my out! Ya know something, Dear Troubadour---I think I like your "Phiffffff"s!!!

Luvs 'n hugs,
EA

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17 posted 2003-07-08 09:46 PM


Marti ~

You bring the gigglepuss out in me!

Loves 'n hugs,
Linda

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18 posted 2003-07-08 09:47 PM


Chris ~

---the club of "Mind Baldness"--I love it!

Love 'n Laughter,
Linda

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19 posted 2003-07-08 11:19 PM


for someone whose mind is blank you filled the blank lines splendidly excellent
Earth Angel
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20 posted 2003-07-08 11:53 PM


Rosebud ~

Kind of you to say so, dear budding rose!

Warm hugs,
EA

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21 posted 2003-07-09 04:43 AM


I know this personally well
Earth Angel
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22 posted 2003-07-09 08:50 AM


passing shadows ~

Hopefully these phases will pass quickly!--and may they come less frequently--actually, may they never occur again for either of us!

~ May your pencil be forever sharp!

Luvin' hugs,
EA


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23 posted 2003-07-10 09:41 PM


Concise and to the point...very nicely done!!

Anwaar

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24 posted 2003-07-10 10:04 PM


I have dry spells.Then bursts of inspirartion.I guess thats why I am an amateur poet.I write out of a need to write not an obligation.Hang in there.

paladin

....a knight without armor

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25 posted 2003-07-10 10:20 PM


Anwaar ~

My English teachers would be surprised to see how my writing has changed. They always said I was too flowery and verbose! Now I'm "concise"! LOL

Warm hugs,
EA

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26 posted 2003-07-10 10:22 PM


Paladin ~

I do know what you mean! It is easier and more enjoyable to write because you want to, not because you have to!

I'll hang in there! Thank you!

Warm hugs,
EA

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27 posted 2003-07-10 10:44 PM


Short and sweet. Simple, yet complex. Plain, yet fancy. How can thy express thy feelings towards thy poem??

It was great!! Keep up the good work!

Earth Angel
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28 posted 2003-07-10 10:52 PM


P_P_P ~

That was one adorable yin-yang response! Thank you!

Peace & Light,
EA

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29 posted 2003-07-12 07:42 PM




(big hugggssssss) Awwwwwwww, don't worry, sweet Linda, I think we all have some times like these, but I always use my imagination when I start to feel myself being redundant, sometimes I make collages out of magazine pictures and write a response, and I always carry a notion with me, "Play your words like Jimi Hendrix or Jimmy Page!" You've got to let loose like a mad guitarist or scientist! (kiss on cheek) Yay, God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Earth Angel
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30 posted 2003-07-14 09:02 AM


Noah ~

I find it hard to believe that a creative, imaginative, and brilliant mind like yours, could ever be blank!

Huggums,
Linda

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