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angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma

0 posted 2003-07-19 11:41 PM


There's a feeling deep inside of me
That screams and longs to be set free
A spirit that needs to arise
And lift toward the heavenly skies

Like an animal trapped in a cage
Like a demon full of rage
It scrapes and claws at my heart
It makes my body want to impart

This black shadow creeping inside
Making me cry and cry
It grabs ahold of my breath
And tries to squeeze till nothings left

This being without a soul or face
This entity trying to exsist in my place
Once where there was love and happiness
Now there is pain and darkness

This thing making me lose sight
It's getting harder and harder to fight
I've got to draw the power from within
And let my light rise again

angelblueyes

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Local Rebel
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since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia
1 posted 2003-07-20 12:11 PM


welcome to passions blueeyes
it's nice to read a new poet

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
2 posted 2003-07-20 12:44 PM


It's getting harder and harder to fight
I've got to draw the power from within
And let my light rise again


You can do it ....nice write - thanks for sharing it - Roniece Dawson-Bruce

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
3 posted 2003-07-20 01:44 AM


Welcome Angel - yes with a name like that
the light will not be out for long
xxoo

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
4 posted 2003-07-20 01:28 PM


Local Rebel: Thank you for the warm welcome.

Roneice:Thanks for the words of encouragement.

Littlewing: I know this is true for we all have that wonderful light.Thanks.

angelblueyes

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