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Shadows of Time
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0 posted 2003-07-08 09:53 AM


A crack of light breaks through
Washing away the darkness in a surge
The world is revealed as I gaze through clouded eyes
I roll over, seeing you lying there next to me
I wrap my arms around you, embrace you
Pull you close
But you dissolve, slipping through my fingers
With a sigh I roll back into the darkness
And slip back into my dreamless slumber
And wait to see you for real


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1 posted 2003-07-08 10:30 AM


awwwww....this is so touching....
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2 posted 2003-07-09 10:18 AM


But you dissolve, slipping through my fingers
With a sigh I roll back into the darkness
And slip back into my dreamless slumber
And wait to see you for real

I know this... and you've written it so well. *S*

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3 posted 2003-07-09 10:32 AM


I have known of such a morning aura back in the shadows of time...

Beautiful write.

Warm hugs,
EA

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4 posted 2003-07-09 10:48 AM


AWWW, this is so beautiful.
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Ethel

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5 posted 2003-07-09 11:43 AM


nicely done! I could feel that moment
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6 posted 2003-07-09 01:08 PM


very nice...I can picture me doing the same thing
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