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0 posted 2003-07-09 12:33 PM



love is
blind

teach me
your soft
braille




[This message has been edited by Ratleader (07-09-2003 12:42 AM).]

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Martie
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1 posted 2003-07-09 12:51 PM


Ed...I like this...it's all in the fingertips, ya know?
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2 posted 2003-07-09 12:51 PM


What a beautiful thought!

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3 posted 2003-07-09 12:55 PM


This is sounding better by the minute.....

...I'm thinking it's a totally encompassing tactile experience....but fingertips, yeah, that's a good starting place.

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4 posted 2003-07-09 04:36 AM


awesome
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5 posted 2003-07-09 06:21 AM


And kids say school is boring... they just don't know how much fun some learning can be! *G*

I like this very much, sir... so much said in a few perfectly chosen words. *S*

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6 posted 2003-07-09 07:57 AM


Great lines...forming a great poem.
Eric

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7 posted 2003-07-09 08:49 AM


Damn....
This is beautiful!!

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
   you haven't been listening.~

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8 posted 2003-07-09 08:50 AM


Perfectly said...in few words.

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9 posted 2003-07-09 09:44 AM


That was v-e-r-y good! Yes, indeed it was!

Warm hugs and smiles,
EA

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10 posted 2003-07-09 10:49 AM


. . . . . . . . it was good for me too. . . . . . .

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11 posted 2003-07-09 11:00 AM


thats cool man.
Succinct and cool

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12 posted 2003-07-09 11:32 AM


Oh how'd you think these things up Ed? Love how your mind works.
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13 posted 2003-07-09 12:19 PM


Oh wow!

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14 posted 2003-07-09 08:18 PM


Ed:

this is perfection . . .
xxoo

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15 posted 2003-07-10 11:59 PM


... and let your fingers do the talking.

Yep, works for me.

Enjoyed

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16 posted 2003-07-11 12:07 PM


This is a "Perfect 10" or less !

Patricia

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17 posted 2003-07-11 10:12 PM


Great job. Keep on writting.
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