navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #27 » Only The Question Is Eternal
Open Poetry #27
Post A Reply Post New Topic Only The Question Is Eternal Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
icebox
Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383
in the shadows

0 posted 2003-07-07 11:39 PM



Hear, "I do." "I do."

Say, "unto death do us part."

Success means one died?


©2003 by icebox

© Copyright 2003 icebox - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2003-07-08 12:05 PM


and one lived...Brilliant.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
2 posted 2003-07-08 12:15 PM


Youre always in my head..scary place to be. I just had this discussion yesterday with some friends. marriage..phblllllllt
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2003-07-08 05:54 AM


I think so...james
Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

4 posted 2003-07-08 07:23 AM


I believe that the success is in the fact that they were content to stay till death did the parting.

Clever write and twist poet sir

Well ... OK ... but you have to wash it first.

(bumper sticker humor) ;)

Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
5 posted 2003-07-08 10:58 AM


icebox...that's why I didn't have those words in my ceremony, and substituded, forever.
Mysteria
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada
6 posted 2003-07-08 12:15 PM


But the beauty is that one survived with the memories to find the answers.  Ah, but I only have a jar on my mantle with ashes of past husbands   Like the others you seem to always be in my mind these days with your wit and knowledge.  I am so glad you started to post here.
S Arthur Grey
Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom
7 posted 2003-07-08 12:47 PM


Success in failure?
Something died along the way
both were heard to say.


s.a.g.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
8 posted 2003-07-08 12:53 PM


Clever write! --and I like Martie's "forever" substition--but, then again, that is a veeeeeeeery looooooong time! LOL

Luvs 'n hugs,
EA

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #27 » Only The Question Is Eternal

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary