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Tim
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since 1999-06-08
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0 posted 2003-07-07 10:29 PM



It was by happenstance,
Just one of those times,
When she came to me,
Came the maker of rhymes.
She sang of love and heart’s romance,
With pure clear notes of crystal chimes,
A song of all you mean to me,
A simple tune of yet to be
Enwrapped in you eternally,
With rhythms of night’s passion dance
Reminding me my love of thee
Came the maker of rhymes,
Just one of those times,
With just a glance,
Of heart’s disclose,
With just a glance,
Of you, my Rose.



© Copyright 2003 Tim - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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1 posted 2003-07-07 10:34 PM


Love is so like that
Interesting presentation and rhyme scheme.
Enjoyed very much. TD

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2003-07-07 10:53 PM



Nothing finer

than a poet
in love...

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2003-07-08 01:13 AM


beautiful words, beautiful love!

Thanks A Romantic Heart!

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2003-07-08 05:17 AM


sweet
HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
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Perth Western Australia
5 posted 2003-07-08 08:43 AM


romantic hearts , sing songs  in harmony

Hope

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Canada eh.
6 posted 2003-07-08 08:54 AM


Very beautifully expressed Tim.
Much enjoyed this lovely.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
   you haven't been listening.~

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