Scribbling Verse Unsigned and Choppy

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Open Poetry #27

Scribbling Verse Unsigned and Choppy

x8x_bigmike
Member

since 2003-07-08

Posts 130
California, USA

0 posted 2003-07-09 12:22 PM

Past book cover caution tape
and broken bacardi bottles,
ull find me balancing on two legs of a brittle chair
picking words that float on ciggarette smoke
scribbling verse unsigned and choppy
A place where cat shadows duck between
factory steam stacks, eyes aglow.
I reside,where spiders spin webs
through adolencent minds, blind in their
youth to their own destruction
Here, death knows nothing of race or religion.
just drunk fingers drawing chalk lines
around red and blue bandana's
so till you come ill stay balancing my pen,
the raid keeping the spiders at bay
writing verse unsigned and choppy

[This message has been edited by x8x_bigmike (07-09-2003 01:42 AM).]

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

1 posted 2003-07-09 03:53 PM

This one is crowded with images. I like it. A lot.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2003-07-09 04:23 PM

LOL. If you put down that can of Raid, I'll come back there and read with ya!

Those might be POE etic spiders.

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