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Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

0 posted 2003-07-07 08:49 PM

I've had some requests via email and through replies to post a love poem........
This is an oldie, though slightly re-written.

Soulmate of My Heart

Many lifetimes ago
upon the sands of time,
our souls awoke
to God's laughter
and sailed the heavenly breeze of love.
Hand in hand,
our spirits danced the warmth of wings,
and as God smiled
and breathed his joy,
we became one,
a love story from the sigh of God;
knowing that one day
we shall meet again on earth.
And in that moment
destiny shall become ours.

For, my eyes need not see you now
to know that you exist,
my heart already knows.

By Melissa Long-Monette

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-07-07 09:10 PM

"For, my eyes need not see you now
to know that you exist,
my heart already knows."

Perfectly beautiful Melissa..
and one of the best love poems I have ever read!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
you haven't been listening.~

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

2 posted 2003-07-07 09:43 PM

A monet, By monette

Jason

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

3 posted 2003-07-07 10:05 PM

Beautiful words Melissa, one suggestion though I think a better title would be Heart's Soulmate..just to tighten it up a bit. Either way lovely words find time to believe in them again

Janette

Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

4 posted 2003-07-07 10:49 PM

Such a delight to read you, this one is lovely.

Enjoyed

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

5 posted 2003-07-18 04:06 AM

So beautiful, Melissa...both in thought and in verse.
Hugs,
~Vicky
"it is better to be a part of beauty
for one instant and then cease to
exist than to exist forever
and never be a part of beauty"
-- Don Marquis

JaiOfHeaven
Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 207
California, Usa

6 posted 2003-07-18 04:21 AM

"For, my eyes need not see you now
to know that you exist,
my heart already knows."

I know this all too well.
Thanks for the write.

Jai

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2003-07-18 05:55 AM

Enjoyoed...and the last three lines really did it for me...James

x8x_bigmike
Member

since 2003-07-08

Posts 130
California, USA

8 posted 2003-07-18 05:58 AM

like a beautifull painting realized...now what do you do if thats gone...the ultimate question...was it ever there? or is it always?

Great poem..

peppermint35
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1106
Texas, USA

9 posted 2003-07-19 06:05 AM

Sweetly written and full of promise..

and Mike, if I may... sigh.. maybe it wasn't meant to be this time around, you think? I wish I knew the answer to that question myself.. so very much, right now..

but this is truly a lovely write and enjoyed it so much

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

El_Campeador
Senior Member

since 2003-01-29

Posts 761
Ohio, USA

10 posted 2003-07-19 08:38 AM

Lovely, Melissa...

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

11 posted 2003-07-19 08:46 AM

Melissa,
I like it, I like it.
For, my eyes need not see you now
to know that you exist,
my heart already knows.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

12 posted 2003-07-19 08:58 AM

our souls awoke
to God's laughter
and sailed the heavenly breeze of love.
Hand in hand,
our spirits danced the warmth of wings,
and as God smiled
and breathed his joy,
we became one,
a love story from the sigh of God;

Oh yes!! You know that this romantice loves this poem, Melissa!
It's absolutely beautiful, and the way I believe it is.

Hugs

Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (07-19-2003 08:59 AM).]

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

13 posted 2003-07-19 11:06 AM

Love it, Melissa.
Sandra

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

14 posted 2003-07-19 12:33 PM

Captured the romantic in me from the start. What a lovely write. I liked the mention of God in this write all the way through. Enjoyed!!!!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

15 posted 2003-07-19 02:13 PM

not used to something so pretty and romantic from you. still liked it, you can write any way and still pull it off with style

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

16 posted 2003-07-19 09:52 PM

Melissa - this is astounding!
You know that is my most treasured picture of Angels . . .
Love at its finest . . .
nicely done
xxoo

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

17 posted 2003-07-19 10:32 PM

This was beautiful and I loved it. The words and imagery drew me in.Love the angels.Very well done.
angelblueyes

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