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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296


0 posted 2003-07-07 05:29 PM


No matter how hard core you pretend to be
I think perhaps you felt it was time that I know
Time to let go…doing a favor for me
Thank you for the call…the one with her name on it
Now, all seems to fall into place
The after shock is gone
And when the hurt is finally a memory
Space, time and essence will open wide
Only one regret…if only….I’d have known


Driving home from work today...a strange feeling came over me..after 5 years...finally free and I wondered where I had been all those years....where in the world had I been?  



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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2003-07-07 05:53 PM


Only one regret…if only…I’d have known


that's how I felt back then.

M

Bonnie j
Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588
Ohio
2 posted 2003-07-07 05:59 PM


Hi there Lee J.. That road of life sure can get bumpy. Man oh man.
See Ya sis
Bon-Bon

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
3 posted 2003-07-07 08:25 PM


God Lee . . .

I know . . . is like I look back
and see someone else and look now and see a changing person and look to the future
and see someone happy . . .
craziness I know . . . but God

*reminds me of a Dave Matthews tune:
"Where are you goin, where have ya been?"
this is awesome Lee
xxoo

QjQ
Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
U.S.A.
4 posted 2003-07-07 08:35 PM


many times we are blinded by the unknown,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


garysgirl
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since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
5 posted 2003-07-07 09:23 PM


The after shock is gone
And when the hurt is finally a memory
Space, time and essence will open wide


LeeJ, you will be there soon, you will...  
Hugs  
Ethel

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2003-07-08 05:57 AM


Welcome to the world...James
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