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gemjop
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0 posted 2003-07-07 04:25 PM





Hang my anger
it's not worth living

Barb wire scathed
words

I see you
and through myself

You trust me.
I know you?

Is that your honest belief?

From where do I scrape
energy

To lift my head
whilst sickly chin deep

You always did this
blaming me

When you realise
your mistakes.

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Wind
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1 posted 2003-07-07 05:43 PM


a little sidetracked? I love hearing your trials and tribulations.

mmm...what are we cooking here? A big pot of trouble...Try some, it's delicious

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

littlewing
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2 posted 2003-07-07 08:43 PM


Hey Gem?

Grrrrr . . . yes yes exactly

You always did this
blaming me

When you realise
your mistakes.

God dont you despise that!!!
I know this one missy . . . oh yes I do
xxoo

garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-07-07 09:08 PM


You always did this
blaming me

When you realise
your mistakes.


Gemma, I hate that, too....when somebody
can't face up to their own mistakes!!!     

Heart hugs, my friend     
Ethel Mae

Jason Lyle
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4 posted 2003-07-07 09:46 PM


I loved this.

Jason

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5 posted 2003-07-08 04:35 PM


Ooh, you have the hand of an artist, and the eye of a sniper! Very nice.

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Bill Charles
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6 posted 2003-07-08 08:14 PM


gemjop - like your words and thoughts in this...

BC

NewEnglandlazurlu
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7 posted 2003-07-08 08:41 PM


Gemma, It burns me when people will not take responsibility for their own words, actions and especially mistakes.

You did a great job of expressing feelings in this piece.

Huggles, Marti

Aenimal
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8 posted 2003-07-08 08:48 PM



You always did this
blaming me

When you realise
your mistakes.

This applies to so many people I've lived with..sigh

passing shadows
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9 posted 2003-07-09 05:02 AM


it applies to many people in general
gemjop
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10 posted 2003-07-09 05:45 AM


Thanks for the replies. I bet so many people can relate. It's almost comical though, when suddenly someone can blame you for something you werent even aware had happened, which probably never did, because of their own guilt and anger they feel towards themselves. aaaaaaarrrrrrrgh! I'm waiting for an apology, which I know will never come.

once again, thanks for stopping by and reading my rambling anger. sigh...

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