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HopeS
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0 posted 2003-07-07 12:58 PM



Would I Suffer Regrets

Of his circumstances
He wrote occasionally
I notice the difference
Of what he used to be

I had noticed changes
Nothing  ever precise
In writing occasionally
Just enough to suffice

This heart relied upon
His perhaps or maybe
Occasions I can recall
He added an apology

I remember longingly
It is then I begin to cry
Would I suffer regrets
If I ever said goodbye

HopeĀ©2003

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1 posted 2003-07-07 01:01 PM


I remember longingly
It is then I begin to cry
Would I suffer regrets
If I ever said goodbye

WOW Hope, I really like this one.
I have always said that I want to regret the things I haven't done in life more than the things that I have!

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2 posted 2003-07-07 01:40 PM


I remember longingly
It is then I begin to cry
Would I suffer regrets
If I ever said goodbye


Hope, sometimes we have to decided if the waiting
is worth it or not.

And, also, I think it's better not to say "goodbye',
if we think we may regret doing so.

I really hope that you make the right desicion for you, my friend.  
Hugs  
Ethel

HopeS
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3 posted 2003-07-08 12:19 PM


Thanks Tim  for your thoughtful reply,
I am never the type to say goodbye  
Hope

HopeS
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4 posted 2003-07-08 12:21 PM


Thank you Ethel for your caring thoughts
yes I would regret it I know this , I am not the type to say goodbye anyway , so I shall wait patiently

Hope

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5 posted 2003-07-08 10:53 AM


maybe the wait is worth it....I've found it can be...and I know what you mean about good-bye....
HopeS
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6 posted 2003-07-08 10:59 AM


Thanks Sea , yes you are so right ,  the wait was worth it !!!
I recieved 2 greetings cards today and another of his apologies

Hope

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7 posted 2003-07-08 11:00 AM


Hello Lady this touched me...the pain can be more painful before the goodbyes can't it? the ache of knowing it looms. so dust it under the carpet, its never goodbye anyway is it, just, til next time, someones impression on our lives never leaves us. But i'm sure you know that.

very much enjoyed this soft emotional write.

love gem xx

HopeS
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8 posted 2003-07-08 11:06 AM


Thanks Gem for your caring thoughtful reply ,
I think there must be some type of telepathy between me and him because each time I write this way I always seem to hear from him ,which I did today , so yes he is etched forever

Hope

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9 posted 2003-07-08 11:32 AM


a very deeply caring and beautiful write from a lovely heart.  Sometimes I can't help but ponder if we've all been in love with the same man....sheesh would that be a kick in the pants...wouldn't surprise me in the least...Hope God bless and wishing you happiness, and this guy better know what he has in you...love Lee J.
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10 posted 2003-07-08 12:14 PM


Oh Hope...I know this...but I feel like I am going to regret saying hello or goodbye to him.  I usually have no problems with goodbye under these circumstances.  Unfortunately, I found a man in which I am afraid to say either one.

Thinking about you.

Patricia


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11 posted 2003-07-08 12:17 PM


You know Hope you write this pain so well, and if it is bringing you good luck in a connection with him, who cares?  Write on girl, as only you can do.  Miss all your cute emails, I am in Cape Cod, but use the email shown here I can get them
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12 posted 2003-07-08 12:20 PM


Thank you Lee for your understanding , it may surprise most but it is and only can be a loving friendship


Hope

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13 posted 2003-07-08 12:24 PM


Thank you for taking the time to reply with your thoughts Patricia .... due to circumstances .... we will never be able to touch ... "only keep in touch " although he as forever touched my heart

Hope

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14 posted 2003-07-08 12:29 PM


Thanks Sharon , yes perhaps emotions vibrate across oceans becauuse he seems to sense when I am down  
Hope
P.S hope you are having a great time away

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