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Original Sin
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Original Sin |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
And I remind myself - That long before original sin, we stood in original innocence...and I smile at the holy folly of it all. And step within the waiting garden. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh Eric, this is absolutely genial and shows your wonderful connection with the Source of the Divine. Original innocence! If only we could be totally aware of this sacred truth! I step with you in the waiting garden! I am enthusiastic about your deep intuition and I so agree. Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ohh Eric, please proceed . . . this is amazing . . . calming xxoo |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
"...the holy folly of it all"... A superb line here. What a great write, and so warm too. Men and women need to remember the honor in creation, as well as the pitfalls. TD |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Eric, Another keeper, my friend. I shall be reading your poetry to this person I know. (smiling big time at you and the chance to enlighten with your words.) Eric, you are just so awesome. Patricia |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Amazing write as always Eric! Extremely well done! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Eric, you are so good!!  "If I know there's no possible way I can change something or do about something, then I push it to the back room in my mind & slam the door on it." ~Gary~ ~Heart hugs to you~ Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (07-07-2003 05:10 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Holy folly... Now this will stick to me all night like a Neil Diamond gem... |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Very thought provoking. Enjoyed this very much. |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
*smiles* I like this... Sunkissed. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Liked this poem very much! Thanks A Romantic Heart |
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