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tornskirt
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since 2003-03-30
Posts 87


0 posted 2003-07-07 10:05 AM


hold me
comfort me

need me

want me

touch me

feel me

caress me

move me


i need you to

be with me

make me feel

...you

open my pores

renew my senses

make me see

make me hear

make me scream in pleasure


i need you to hold me

right now...

i need to you be there

be a man...

and show me how

to be a woman

never leave the light on if you don't want to be found

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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2003-07-07 10:10 AM


tornskirt
The invitation is irresitable. LOL enjoyed.

garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-07-07 10:22 AM


Very good emotions put out there!!  
Hugs  
Ethel

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
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3 posted 2003-07-07 02:16 PM


Jess:

this is awesome . . . yes . . .
purification indeed
xxoo

Local Rebel
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since 1999-12-21
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Southern Abstentia
4 posted 2003-07-07 02:51 PM


does your muse know -- what a pity if not -- you should be sending this direct --
papabear
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since 1999-09-17
Posts 102
Atlanta, GA
5 posted 2003-07-07 03:59 PM


Very nice

I’ve loved; I’ve lost,
yet I yearn to love again.
Lord please grant me the strength,
and show me where to begin.

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