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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296


0 posted 2003-07-07 06:38 AM


Pine needles soft underfoot
Aura of light shouldering through summits
Cocktail of sonic bursts
Turning .32 caliber bullets away
Swift currents announcing a natural homage
Twilight whistles through sun dappled foliage
Candles eddy culmination in highly flavored dreams
Nonchalant music leaping like infantile flames
Smooth flow of pillowy ocean channels
Towering rhythm like rational unrehearsed sea foam
Panoramas scattering curling hunchbacks of waves
Whirling through the shutters of yesterdays
Almost a whisper now, across the harbor, smiles
Measureless glory, dripping treasures, falling out of pockets
New spring water lapping over breathing rocks
Having the audacity to not deny itself
Wrapped in shawls of open water wide-eyed pearls
Porcelain beauty swarms through the nostrils of Grande Piano
Absolute metaphors dare the carriage of impressions
Flattering courier of concepts procession
Speaking to romantic views of the ageless artists
Illuminating shadows within the grasps of passion's politeness
Creature of light beaming inner strength and prowess
Nature framed by the hand of divine, speaker of mankind
The ferryman's lamp-light, flickers within the milieu of a lovers mind
Enjoying assurance perceived in Gods creative time
Shortsighted? More of a guiding light, handsome and well groomed
Taming the proper balance of nature framed, figuratively speaking speaking....
A balance we choose.
Tendons that create the heart
Blending together elements of the lamb
The challenge of every artist, where creative nature stands
With open arms and hungry hands

We're all going to fall down once in awhile...but...we'll stand up again, brush ourselves off and start all over again, one step at a time...one day at a time...


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Rick
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia
1 posted 2003-07-07 07:06 AM


Hi Lee, you have a very expressive mind, constructing pictures and thoughts to ponder, one step at a time, one day at a time, how true these words echo, thank you for sharing and take care.

Sincerely
Rick

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