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peppermint35
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0 posted 2003-07-07 04:05 AM



I'm trying to learn to get over you
Trying to learn to accept the pain
Learn the lesson that comes with this
Trying to learn that a reason remains
To go on after getting over you

I'm trying to disengage from you
Cutting the ties that bind us two
Trying to excise you from inside of me
It's going to be very hard to do
I can't tell where you end and I begin
But I'm trying to get over you

I'm trying to build my life again
To learn how to live it unplanned
Sounds such a simple thing to do
Learn how to plan a life
Somewhere without you
No destination to get to
I'm trying to get over you

Please whatever else you might do
Let me learn to get over you.

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
   Percy Bysshe Shelley

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-07-07 04:59 AM


this is painful...and I have felt this...still do. It's difficult to learn.
Ericc
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2 posted 2003-07-07 07:53 AM


Very lyrical and full of tender angst.
Eric

Patricia
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3 posted 2003-07-07 08:15 AM


Peppermint,

I know this...you know what I think it takes?  Time.  Give yourself some time, my friend.  I can say this on an intellectual level; however, I know from experience it is not the easiest thing one can do.

I love this honest piece of writing because I can certainly relate.

Patricia

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4 posted 2003-07-08 01:24 PM


Some learnings take a long, long time... and some wounds seem to fester forever. *S* But there will be sunny skies eventually... I hope you find them soon. *S*
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5 posted 2003-07-08 01:31 PM


Whew! That reached out, then reached in, and grabbed me in the solar plexus and then tugged at my heart! Memories! Bad ones! --and you wrote about such pain, so very well!

Sending you a special shampoo that will help you wash that man right out of your hair!


EA

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