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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2003-07-07 02:19 AM


Inside your heart I want to be, deep
inside your mind, I want to know everything,

Your thoughts, your dreams, your wishes, your desires, I want to pull myself deep into you,
as deep as I can get,the more I love you, the more your love washes over me and gets me wet,

I want to always be your soul, your passion, your muse, your love, your fire, your are deep inside of me, you I respect,

I love you the very way that you are, all of you I love, every part, I love to get deep, deep, way deep into your heart,

Days go by, i can go deeper yet, for you are my deepest ocean, beautiful blue ocean that I love to swim inside of,

I could swim forever deep inside your love, many treasures do i find in your ocean, in your mind,
Some seahells, some gold, jewels and diamonds that shine,

Your mermaid I am, I sing my song of love for you,
swimming and singing inside your heart, I want to go deep, deep inside your heart and mind,

You are my deep universe, Your love is all the stars inside the vast heavens, I could travel deep, deep with you, forever in time,

Deep you are, I love you for your wisdom, your intelligence, your love, your wit, charm, I love you for the depths of your soul, you set off my hearts alarm,

Deep is everything about you, your passion, your poetry, your love for me, deep like all the earthen valleys,

I could explore every part of you internally, eternally, externally, always finding how fascinating you truely are,

Deep is our love, deeper we will go, to the ends of the earth, ends of time, boundless, When i think of you, I am drowning in your love....for you are deep!



[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (07-07-2003 05:26 AM).]

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Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
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1 posted 2003-07-07 04:22 AM


You are too kind and very,very sweet my love..

Love Goldenrose.xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx


A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2003-07-07 04:26 AM


Thanks

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (07-08-2003 05:37 AM).]

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2003-07-07 05:42 AM


Nice writing from your heart...Your comment reminded me of Wolverton Mountain..."Her tender lips, were sweeter than honey, and the mountain protects her there."  James
Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
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4 posted 2003-07-07 07:49 AM


Beautiful.
Eric

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06
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Missouri
5 posted 2003-07-07 08:45 AM


Gee, now this is what love is supposed to be...indeed something I have never know.

Very nice!

Patricia

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