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QjQ
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0 posted 2003-07-07 02:18 AM



Stopped Time

as you make up excuses
distant foghorns
haunt me in my sleep
explain your emotions
until you like what you see
as if it mattered
we need nothing but each other
we have stopped time

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-07-07 05:18 AM


very cool
LeeJ
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2 posted 2003-07-07 06:47 AM


beautiful words and so true...Good Morning and happy Monday sent your way.
gemjop
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3 posted 2003-07-07 06:53 AM


very much enjoyed, i have my own interpretation of what this means, it relates to me anyhow, and it helped, so thanks.
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4 posted 2003-07-08 04:51 PM


Every line of this poem speaks to me....men have feelings, and it's a worthy thing to express them so well.

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5 posted 2003-07-08 04:54 PM


what a timely piece!
Margherita
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6 posted 2003-07-08 05:00 PM


When time stops, life IS.
Beautiful.
Love, Margherita

Patricia
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7 posted 2003-07-08 05:29 PM


How beautiful your words fall on the page.

Patricia

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8 posted 2003-07-08 05:40 PM


--and you just stopped my heart! That was beautiful, Q!

Luvs'n hugs,
EA

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