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Guardian
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Shadows of Time Junior Member
since 2003-06-24
Posts 14 |
Look at me Your guardian angel Torn and beaten, bloodied and bruised My life seeping into the ground My wings broken and bones shattered But none of that matters For my soul has been destroyed Because I failed you One tiny slip, one miniscule mistake I made Sent everything blazing into the infernos depths Me Your guardian angel Defeated by my own emotions My own mind Conquered by my own feelings for you |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Intense. Almost sounds like you're giving up. Can you become a Phoenix now, and forget about being someone's guardian angel? |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Shadows . . . awesome write I do know that bloodied and bruised I think we all do but yes . . . we can only do for ourselves first xxoo |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Makes me wonder how many times I've made mine cry... and I simply berated her for not being on the job. *S* I enjoyed this read. *S* |
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