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gemjop
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0 posted 2003-07-06 03:50 PM



Seething
restlessly forcing the fire
back into lungs

Hold the softness
in reserve for self to buy
when words make sense again

Beats push upon brain
stirring the missing
of you, of you

Refusing want
hole in heart needs lies
awaiting the confession

Silence in sleep
longing the fade of open
so i may close.

© Copyright 2003 gj - All Rights Reserved
Wind
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1 posted 2003-07-06 03:59 PM


Hi Gem, where were you? I was about to do a poem when I saw yours. I've missed you. Haha, I'm putting this in my library in case YOU run off again

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

Aenimal
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2 posted 2003-07-06 04:06 PM


Hold the softness
in reserve for self to buy
when words make sense again

amazing

littlewing
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3 posted 2003-07-06 04:12 PM


longing the fade of open . . .
missed you gemma
xxoo

wranx
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4 posted 2003-07-06 05:59 PM


"Seething
restlessly forcing the fire
back into lungs"

Great image Gemma, There are others, but this I like best.



gemjop
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5 posted 2003-07-06 06:03 PM


OOOOh, 4 of my favourite poets? how lucky am I? Thanks guys for your truly wonderful words. Glad you enjoyed my sorrow. lol, someones got to!
Wind
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6 posted 2003-07-06 06:09 PM


aww.. Are we really your favorites? I know you're mine

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

[This message has been edited by Wind (07-06-2003 06:10 PM).]

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7 posted 2003-07-06 07:35 PM


Hold the softness
in reserve for self to buy
when words make sense again


Heh how well you write Lady, how well you write

It is said the Creator has taken a handful of South Wind and given each newborn Arabian the power of flight without wings

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