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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-07-06 12:37 PM


Invisible Scars

like the wind
my words are tossed
and lost,
not my intent

dripping wet
with thought

I am drawn to you
painted in reverse
whitewashing the blues away
wandering aimlessly in love
before
I close my eyes
to what is.

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2003-07-06 12:44 PM


scars are reminders
love is somehow worth every pain

peppermint35
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2 posted 2003-07-06 12:46 PM


Yes, oh yes.. that's what I am talking about.. such talent.

Thank you for sharing with us.

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
   Percy Bysshe Shelley

Magnus
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3 posted 2003-07-06 12:51 PM


I know well of this.  You say it well ....
Thanx M..

littlewing
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4 posted 2003-07-06 01:49 PM


dripping wet with thought . . .

Godddddd Maureen . . . yes
and sometimes it is hard to
close our eyes
to all of it . . . I know
xxoo

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
5 posted 2003-07-06 02:44 PM


Oh yes, once again, my friend, you have described this so well.
Sandra

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
6 posted 2003-07-06 09:13 PM


I am drawn to you
painted in reverse
whitewashing the blues away
  
If only our scars washed away that easily,
sometimes it's just too much to open our eyes and accept the fact, that what we were seeing wasn't happening at all.  Hugs to you Maureen~

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just out of reach
7 posted 2003-07-06 10:20 PM





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