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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-07-06 12:30 PM


He Thinks

he thinks
I am
one day
late for
a lily
that is
not true
my heart
beats past
sun down


"if you keep looking back, you are going to miss your whole life" Unknown

© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
S Arthur Grey
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since 2001-03-19
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woven by a poet's loom
1 posted 2003-07-06 12:41 PM


A Rose, a Daisy, a Lily . . .
All in the eyes of the beholder.

"Bloom where you grow."

s.a.g.

S Arthur Grey
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woven by a poet's loom
2 posted 2003-07-06 12:42 PM


Even the night has its flowers.
Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2003-07-06 01:01 PM


how beautiful, day or night
the scent of your poetry is always delightful

littlewing
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4 posted 2003-07-06 01:46 PM


. . . in contrast to the flower itself
Helen, you bloom well beyond your seasons
xxoo

Ericc
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5 posted 2003-07-06 01:47 PM


So beautiful.
Eric

Amature2
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6 posted 2003-07-10 09:59 PM


This is very nice 1slick_lady.
Blush
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Ky
7 posted 2003-07-10 10:36 PM


Nicely done hun
Wonderful that our hearts beat on
Luv this
Thanks for the warm welcome
Susan~

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