I hide my scorn of anything emotional

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Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

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Riding

0 posted 2003-07-05 06:47 PM

I hide my scorn of
anything emotional
when I remember the way
you smiled and said that
you loved me before you
left me to fend for myself
when all I wanted was to be with
the man that I loved.

I hide my scorn of
anything emotional
when I remember the way
that your touch made me feel
and the way I felt so beautiful
when you looked at me with those blue eyes
and kissed me asking if I was okay.

I hide my scorn of
anything emotional
when I remember the way
that I felt like I wanted to
spend the rest of my life with you
no matter what was thrown at us
and I found out that you felt the same way.

I hide my scorn of
anything emotional
when I remember the way
that I loved you and still do
and probably always will, because
it's been over a month already and
last night I cried again.

***I miss you Will

***

It is said the Creator has taken a handful of South Wind and given each newborn Arabian the power of flight without wings

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2003-07-05 06:49 PM

Skyfire - your words say much about your heart, hang in there...

BC

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

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By the Seaside

2 posted 2003-07-05 07:00 PM

Unfortunately we can't hide our scorn, or our intermost feelings, or ignore that which causes so much pain...from ourselves. It's like an open wound that takes forever to heal.

Skyfire...I understand this, and I thank you for writing with all your heart!!!

skyshine

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since 2002-02-07

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Beneath the northern stars

3 posted 2003-07-06 09:39 AM

I'll have to come back later and give this a more in depth reply, but here's a

for now.

~Elizabeth

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

skyshine

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Beneath the northern stars

4 posted 2003-07-06 09:45 AM

Oh yeah, I haven't been on MSN lately cause it sucks so I will probably get a new sn for it. I'll let you know when/if that happens.

~Elizabeth

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

peppermint35
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since 2000-05-28

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Texas, USA

5 posted 2003-07-06 10:54 AM

I refuse to try to find words that will tell you how well I know you wrote this, so I will simply tell you..

YES..

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

Midnitesun

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Gaia

6 posted 2003-07-06 11:09 AM

heart hugs to you
actually, you haven't hidden a thing, dear friend

PoetryIsLife

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since 2001-10-27

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...in my boxers...

7 posted 2003-07-09 01:29 AM

~Titus

"I want you to hit me as hard as you can." No, really, I do.

passing shadows
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displaced

8 posted 2003-07-09 04:29 AM

this is sad...I do understand

Kielo
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9 posted 2003-07-10 02:20 AM

*BUGS*

Kielo

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

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Florida, USA

10 posted 2003-07-10 02:53 AM

I hide my scorn of
anything emotional
when I remember the way
that I loved you and still do
and probably always will, because
it's been over a month already and
last night I cried again

Rhonda, this hurts..... I'm sorry.

Heart hugs to you, my friend

Ethel

mirror man
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since 2001-01-08

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11 posted 2003-07-10 01:56 PM

Very honest and open. Enjoyed.

vandana

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USA

12 posted 2003-07-10 02:12 PM

enjoyed

Larry C

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13 posted 2003-07-10 02:46 PM

Rhonda,
More pain than one sweet girl should have to endure. Very well written. I still pray for you to have peace, hope, courage and love.

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

14 posted 2003-07-10 04:56 PM

I enjoyed this one. I know what you mean about the way he made you feel beautiful. And how could something like that end? I don't know. But it will take more than a month to heal.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Jennis#1
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IL, Usa

15 posted 2003-07-10 05:37 PM

Great piece of work. I hope to read more of your work.

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