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gemjop
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0 posted 2003-07-05 09:55 AM



Daily smoke
flesh fills out the mirror
where something once was.

The rocks you roll are laughable
smoke dreams
strumming the words you think you understand.

Inhale you
now i spit you out
wishing I could lie about the good times.

I breathe a different air to you
though stale and alike
mine keeps me concious.

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2003-07-05 10:02 AM


gemjop,
LOL enjoyed.


garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-07-05 10:19 AM


Inhale you
now i spit you out
wishing I could lie about the good times.

I breathe a different air to you
though stale and alike
mine keeps me concious.


Hi Gemma  
Little friend..........      
Loveya, little Lady  
Ethel

Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
3 posted 2003-07-05 11:15 AM


Bout time you got back
passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2003-07-05 01:07 PM


"wishing I could lie about the good times"

sigh

Janette
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5 posted 2003-07-05 02:11 PM


    ... touche' ...

Enjoyed this witty piece.

Wind
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6 posted 2003-07-05 02:19 PM


ahaha... you allways tell me off for disappearing...and now you're doing it. Grr.. and you didn't even say hello. I missed ya honey, was an awsome poem

I'd break a mirror,
and see that your face,
was still there,

glass shattered,
bones shattered,
it makes no difference,

when you're gone

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
7 posted 2003-07-05 03:18 PM


Deep breath, that's right
breathe baby breathe~

Hugs gemma~

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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8 posted 2003-07-06 10:53 PM


gem . .
you know there are way too many lines I identify with in this write . . .
as a matter of fact I wish it had come from my own pen

brilliant gem and like to see you like this
and also know how hard those memories take a toll on the heart . . .
xxoo

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