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So Cold
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So Cold |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
It Is so cold Tonight The night has filled the stars Tonight I told you I will come and hold you In my arms So cold Don't shiver I will warm you I will wrap you with my hand Unfolded memories Never mention it to me Iam so here And will be stay In this cold weather Let us see through winter And pray for our night Would stay long Let our song play into The dawn of winter It Is so cold tonight It is the winter That the echo I hear WIthin my heart It is so quiet here Wind blowing So cold tonight So clod here Quiet night With love.... Quiet whispers Cold.... |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Enjoyed your poem Vandana. Nicely written. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
A very good poem, sweet friend. I enjoyed reading it.  Hugs to you  Ethel |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed your words...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Ahh I felt the cold! But together you'll be warm. As always I love the rhythm of your poem. Love, Margherita  |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
A good poem!!! Neeraja |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) And with the magic of love, your heart will always glow with warmth, yay! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
buuuuurrrrrrrr! *shivers* |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
this fits me perfectly. The shivering..coldness...I'm putting it into the library  I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, If you can tell me something worth fighting for -coldplay [This message has been edited by Wind (07-08-2003 03:02 PM).] |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
vandana, I loved this on two levels. One, it was a wonderfully written poem and two .... it's sultry, scorching hot here and this reminded me of cold weather and gave me a moment's relief!!! Huggles, Marti |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A gentle write from your heart... Lovely, vandana. Luvs 'n hugs, EA |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
bump! |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
In my arms So cold Don't shiver I will warm you I will wrap you with my hand Unfolded memories warming thoughts vandana. good to see you here girl. |
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