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Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
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0 posted 2003-07-05 05:52 AM


Fresh summer breeze blows onto my face, as the long shadows of early evening grow across the ground.

My spiraling inward eye begins to focus on your beauty and i imagine what you are doing.
Emerald green grasses dance in the breeze, they know of the love with you i have found.

Sing me a love song crying to be free my love.
Simple but beautiful it should be, sing it from the very depths of your soul and heart.

Your fine singing voice, pure and light will be a comfort from being away from you my sweet love,never from you do i want to part.

Cloudless sky rising above my head, swifts fly fast and catch food on the wing.
Love lies across the miles,with every gust of wind i feel your presence near me.

Freedom is mine, love is ours, yearning of a love with meaning.
All i now want is for you to be happy, with a sweetly smiling face, that is what i want to see.


[This message has been edited by Goldenrose (07-05-2003 08:12 AM).]

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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2003-07-05 07:46 AM


Phil I hope you stay at Passions, your work is too beautiful to be hidden or censored...
and your heart too beautiful to be loved...

love always, ARH

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2003-07-05 08:11 AM


Nice writing...especially like the title and the last two paragraphs...James
Tim
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since 1999-06-08
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3 posted 2003-07-05 10:41 AM


some nice lines, enjoyed.
littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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New York
4 posted 2003-07-06 01:08 PM


beautiful Phil indeed . . .
a celtic romance in itself . . .
xxoo

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