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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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just a slightly dangerous twitching of the tail lidded eyes are traveling following the bouncing ball veiled in the oblivious a picture of serenity yawning in the face of it languid in the lick of paw one by one a stretch of claw-- removing scent of the last kill... in the cross-hairs of the hunt through the scope and to the point-- I ask you, beg you, tell me this-- "Who is carrying the gun?" [This message has been edited by serenity blaze (07-05-2003 05:07 AM).] |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Indeed |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ah, you this is excellent writing yanno? [This message has been edited by Mysteria (07-05-2003 10:03 AM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yes, just who is? |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
hmmmm....scary but nice....just like I like 'em. Hey, Aenimal, you got these instincts? ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, You do come up with a pip every once in a while.  |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Sound like my cat in the middle of the night when she wants my attention! |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
So the nipper gets nipped? Nicely done. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
You're gonna shoot your cat?????? I can remember being ready to shoot mine more than a few (hundred) times, for walking back and forth along the vertical blinds at 3am until I let her out.....now I miss it. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
just a slightly dangerous . . . ......picture of serenity did the corners just get darker? or does my pair annoy ya? sleek you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a good kitty-kicker poem for LngJhn [This message has been edited by passing shadows (07-05-2003 12:42 PM).] |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
meow.... (lauging at dixie -- I waz thinkin the same) |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Hmm... *thinking now* It is said the Creator has taken a handful of South Wind and given each newborn Arabian the power of flight without wings |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
  [This message has been edited by serenity blaze (07-05-2003 06:53 PM).] |
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