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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Next destiny is on a beach it’s in the tide that roars the very sand that clings to me is from a foreign shore nothing ever stays in halt forever the flow goes on I hear the song of the waves and to it’s whispering I am drawn "if you keep looking back, you are going to miss your whole life" Unknown |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
....and there are waves in everything -- everything! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
love the imagery here and the suggestion that all is so terribly temporary here  |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
as we are drawn to you words |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
When you put your hand in the ocean you are touching all the waters of the world. Yes, all things end, all things change, and yet... When you touch the soul of another, truly touch the soul, you are connected for that moment to all the souls in an infinite universe. I live near the seacoast. It is hot tonight and windows are open. As I read your poem, a breeze bought in the scent of the mother ocean. It made me smile. Thank you for sharing your poem. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Perhaps it is that you are Venus reincarnated, and what you feel is a need to return (your "destiny" full circle, from birth) to the waves from which you uprose? ******* ice |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Those grains of sand upon the waves bind the shores together... Nicely said, H...  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
the world keeps spinning round and round...sigh |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
you have set forth a primed example of such goodness and love...very much enjoyed...thank you |
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IntoTheFlames Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 92Va, USA |
Great job!!! Destiny is inevitably all those and more..I love the way you compare it to the sea! Excelent! ~*Summer*~ |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
yep, every single grain destiny well done -- clicked on this one about 4 times now |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
"and to it’s whispering I am drawn" indeed, we all are... another beauty, helen |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oooooo, wish I wrote that! Nice one Helen~ |
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