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D.Lester Young
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Austin, Tx

0 posted 2003-07-05 01:40 AM


Somersaulting love
tipsy turvy relationship
mixed up music
rock n blues
rolling emotions.

Love hating to feel
heart unwilling to break
desires needing attention
mind ignoring reality
arms needing hugging.

Addiction never admitting
true feeling of emotions
forward moves reversing course
drifting back to the comfort zone
magnetic needs ignoring obligation.

Locked door of security
saying you where unfaithful
shocked judgement of denial
relationship put out of bounds
dedicated commitment or move on.

Flowers of forgiveness
words released within true love
perfect friendship reinvented
sharing time freely engaged
in a special relationship.

Thought: How many have lost the love that devoured them by ignoring the commitment that slowly goes in maintaining the loving relationship that does not need to wander.

D.Lester Young
Somewhere in America not on company time 07/04/03



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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-07-05 01:57 AM


love the way you see relationships
A Romantic Heart
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2 posted 2003-07-05 05:16 AM


I have! your poem was very descriptive, and I hope this wasn't from a true experiance!

My heart goes out to you!

A Romantic Heart

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