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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2003-07-04 09:54 PM



A gold wedding band
falls to the floor

forever

gone
~*~



[This message has been edited by BloomingRose (07-04-2003 09:55 PM).]

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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-07-04 11:01 PM


short and very good write,,,

i like a write with not to many words that express a lot....

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-07-05 12:54 PM


Deb, this is so sad  
Heart hugs  
Ethel

Sunshine
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3 posted 2003-07-05 08:57 PM



The heartbreak

of the ring

fills the air.

Janette
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4 posted 2003-07-05 11:33 PM


Gulp!

*sorry*

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