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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2003-07-04 07:57 PM


“TOUCHING ME WITH YOU”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Your fragrance enchants me
into this night as I lay close
to you, moonbeams play a
duet with your eyes in the
dark of light…

They dance with desires
hidden until now, as
the softness of them caress
me with their charm, and
skin soft meets skin upon satin…

You teach me of passions
longing for your
embrace,
a tender sigh,
lips melting,
touching me with you…
~~~~

[This message has been edited by Bill Charles (07-04-2003 10:45 PM).]

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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2003-07-04 08:00 PM


..."skin soft meets skin upon satin"--
"sensuosity" at its finest...

Luvs 'n hugs,
EA

LeeJ
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2 posted 2003-07-04 08:00 PM


beautifully loving song, aware warm and loving...a greatful read...thank you for sharing.  
Margherita
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3 posted 2003-07-04 08:02 PM


They dance with desires

Bill this is very beautiful ....

A wonderful, charming duet you evoke here ... moonbeams and eyes!

Love, Margherita

Kethry
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4 posted 2003-07-04 08:03 PM


Soft and loving, how you make me yearn for long nights with a partner snuggled close beside me. Still as that's not likely to happen I will have to make do with my microwaved wheat bear. *Sigh.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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5 posted 2003-07-04 08:04 PM


I like this romantic read, Bill... very much.  *S*
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6 posted 2003-07-04 09:03 PM


moonbeams play a
duet with your eyes in the
dark of light…

Bill, another awesome romantic read. hugs for this, Chris

BloomingRose
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7 posted 2003-07-04 09:43 PM


Your fragrance enchants me
into this night as I lay close
to you, moonbeams play a
duet with your eyes in the
dark of light
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

You are a very romantic man.
I love it.

Deb

altoladybj
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8 posted 2003-07-04 10:14 PM


A lovely romantic read and a beautiful write.

Beverly

QjQ
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9 posted 2003-07-04 10:55 PM


very nice write,, and a enjoyed read...

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


Ivy Rose
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10 posted 2003-07-04 10:56 PM


Bill...Just when i think you can't get any better...you get better. What an enchanting, passionate poem this is. Your words so very well chosen to convey the romantic heart within you. ***Ivy Rose
JamesMichael
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11 posted 2003-07-04 11:03 PM


Romantic words...james
Suetang
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12 posted 2003-07-04 11:24 PM


Hello Bill

Another stunning piece from your romantic heart.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

garysgirl
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13 posted 2003-07-04 11:26 PM


Bill, the eyes can't hide the
truth, can they?
Hugs  
Ethel

BluesSerenade
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14 posted 2003-07-04 11:48 PM


Oh darn, I miss those fireworks!

Your poetry reads like a warm sizzle BC~

vandana
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15 posted 2003-07-05 10:55 AM


nice write
inkedgoddess
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16 posted 2003-07-05 11:52 AM


a tender sigh.......yes, so warm it touch
IntoTheFlames
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17 posted 2003-07-05 11:57 AM


Great write!!!!

~*Summer*~

Neeraja
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18 posted 2003-07-05 12:17 PM


What a beautiful poem!!!

sigh... soooo romantic!!

Neeraja

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19 posted 2003-07-05 12:22 PM


I can't see you NOT being romantic
Martie
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20 posted 2003-07-05 12:27 PM


Bill....Warm and romantic, you are!
Patricia
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21 posted 2003-07-05 12:42 PM


This verse is romantically soft- the way touch of lovers should be.

Beautiful...

Patricia

littlewing
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22 posted 2003-07-06 02:53 PM


Your fragrance enchants me
into this night as I lay close
to you, moonbeams play a
duet with your eyes in the
dark of light…

They dance with desires
hidden until now, as
the softness of them caress
me with their charm, and
skin soft meets skin upon satin…

You teach me of passions
longing for your
embrace,
a tender sigh,
lips melting,
touching me with you…

Touching me with your
breath
upon the nape of my neck
Sighs stifled in midair
beware
the moon she knows
Oh yes, she sees
us breathe
the cool crisp clean
night air  
seeeeth - ing passion
in fashion
with fragrance
enchanted by the night
my hand in yours
on this night . . .

I feel no fright


xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (07-06-2003 02:54 PM).]

catalinamoon
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23 posted 2003-07-06 02:56 PM


Hi Bill, I see the romantic soul is alive and well.
Sandra

A Romantic Heart
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24 posted 2003-07-07 01:34 AM


Very romantic and full of passion!

Thanks ARH!

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25 posted 2003-07-08 02:36 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is beautiful, sweet friend, and may you always have love touching your heart and fondle it with loving care! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

hoot_owl_rn
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26 posted 2003-07-09 08:10 PM


Romance makes you shine
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