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LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

0 posted 2003-07-04 06:44 PM

Vision
Ocean’s moon floats on the breath of night
Swallowing up all misconceptions making things right
Limbs lean on morning of beautiful shapes
Hues of human love sent in every way
Along the ocean wildly wandering
Bearing life, ministering
What dreams of dreams that do not flee?
Through wide array and even key
A mountaineer exhales irresistible joy
Encountering all mystery employed
Gaze not an empty vacant paradise
But where heaven seeps intertwined

You come to me without words, yet I can feel and hear your voice
Hues of urgency pulsates vibrant to life
Your naked wet hand sooth tender moments
Imposing ocean’s kiss of day
Keep me wakeful as night imagery slowly burns away
Touching me with azure youthful seasons
Bright omnipresence of your radiant spell
Sweet flowers linger rivulets with magic sounds
Silver music emits emerald green gliding on morning breeze
Lured by the depth of midnight skies
Dissolving rains where ever we dream
Gleaming ocean spirit basking in blue smiles
Outspreads and blooms a breath in noonday dreams
Injuring me less then the uncandid heart

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

1 posted 2003-07-04 06:55 PM

LeeJ...What a gorgeous poem!!! Such splendid images running through its verses. Wonderful work!!! ***Ivy Rose

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

2 posted 2003-07-04 06:59 PM

Hello Lee

I really enjoyed this very much, thank you.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

3 posted 2003-07-04 07:09 PM

Lee,
this just rolls off the tongue.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2003-07-04 07:11 PM

Oh so lovely...and very much enjoyed!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
you haven't been listening.~

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

5 posted 2003-07-04 07:27 PM

Such wonderful imagery... I like this very much. *S*

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2003-07-04 07:55 PM

I enjoy reading your poetry. Its vivid and lively and it holds my interest.

Luvs 'n hugs,
EA

altoladybj
Member

since 2003-06-24

Posts 79
Pennsylvania

7 posted 2003-07-04 09:34 PM

LeeJ, I love the way you use words. I throughly enjoyed this great write. Thanks
for sharing,

Beverly

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