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Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300
MA, USA

0 posted 2003-07-04 06:36 PM



Willow weeping over me...
tears running through your heart.
Your limbs so gracefully bowed
sweeping the ground
with your woven-leaves
brushing over the sadness
that, sometimes, comes over me.

You are bent; but not broken.
You have given me the hope
that, if I, too, am bowed
beneath the weight of testing,
I will be found worthy to stand.

Willow weeping your tears
over me, remember
where I have come from,
how many new phases I am
going through. Let your woven-leaves
drink my tears to ease your thirst
as you grow more green, produce new life.

And, I will remember always
how you bowed your limbs
and how you wept tears over me.


© Copyright 2003 Ivy Rose - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2003-07-04 06:50 PM


a very humble, gracious and giving write...a pleasure to read and absorb...thank you for sharing.
Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
2 posted 2003-07-04 06:58 PM


Hello Ivy Rose

I absolutely loved your words and the images were fabulous.  I love willow trees for they give a feeling of peace and tranquility.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
3 posted 2003-07-04 07:04 PM


Ivy Rose,
the power of this poem is in its serenity and acceptance. Well done!
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
4 posted 2003-07-04 07:18 PM


This is so lovely...
I personally love weeping willows..
for they bend but do not break.
~Heart-hugs, Nancy~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
   you haven't been listening.~

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
5 posted 2003-07-04 09:46 PM


And, I will remember always
how you bowed your limbs
and how you wept tears over me.

What a beautiful analogy Ivy Rose~

This is special for so many reasons.



BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092
Florida
6 posted 2003-07-04 09:48 PM


This is so pretty, and so very touching.
I see much strength blooming in this poem.


Deb

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
7 posted 2003-07-04 11:22 PM


Nicely woven...James
IntoTheFlames
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since 2003-06-21
Posts 92
Va, USA
8 posted 2003-07-04 11:56 PM


"Willow weeping over me..." Great analogy!
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