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SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23
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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2003-07-04 12:26 PM



I Will Persevere
~ By Sue ~

I know that you think
I can not make it alone
But you will soon see
I have made it by myself
Many, many times before

You did not succeed
In trying to convince me
I could not make it
Living on my own, alone
If only you could see me

Life is a struggle
But, it is nothing I fear
Just you wait and see
I will persevere, until
I finally do succeed

7-4-03

© Copyright 2003 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2003-07-04 12:29 PM


--and succeed you shall, indeed!

Loves 'n hugs to you Sweet Sue!
Linda


ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
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my own state
2 posted 2003-07-04 12:32 PM


inspirational...and as long as we keep our wits a recipe to succeed


Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
3 posted 2003-07-04 12:39 PM


Dear Sue, I love the strength of this poem. You are already over the fear and succeeding perfectly!
Beautiful!
Love and hugs. Margherita

Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
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highways, & byways, for now
4 posted 2003-07-04 01:46 PM


SmartChick - it was thought that I could not make it alone either, surprise, surprise... Hang in there...

BC

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2003-07-04 02:21 PM


SmartChick
Well done, enjoyed.

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2003-07-04 09:26 PM


Yes, success will be yours...James
Janette
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Chicagoland for now
7 posted 2003-07-05 10:44 AM


Positive thinking and the determination of a woman ... a powerful combination ... go girl go!

Enjoyed

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