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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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0 posted 2003-07-04 10:40 AM


Nor did I see, indefinite, interesting gestures
Firm self-acceptance, a true expansiveness exalts
Subtlety widening only one thing at a time
Blessed in absolution and high seriousness
Profoundly reflective, adverse, setting the mind’s motion
Freud’s myth of our questioning, meaningless, devoid

Still composed to touch the gathering place eager
To grow from a depth within the light of eyes
And the idea of great distance, without one question
Or hint of demise
Commence both wise of nature and placements
Where flaming images ascend the pillows history
Concludes another name for death…and beyond
There is no fear which navels our path

Changing and caught in our meek and subtle head
Where the greenest turf thrives like metal upon the heart
Optimistic beyond human hearing, an ambassador
Of sea glittering with joy, of its just being

A lark’s song, connoisseur, releases powerful mystical moons
Conversations reopening unlimited hand filled perceptions tuned
Man’s maelstrom be a part of his running beaches
In that instance both happens
Where we undergo the experience

The outdoor value stalks, with an intense feverish heart
We listen very hard for the lights of direction of where to start
Eye’s of Adam…in spirit, evokes anthology of uncanny sensed devotion
Warmth of equations, where water leaps up to a poetic tradition in motion
Deriving an irony, despite all the effort we put out
Voicing our path, taking in breath dropping ideals absolute

Dripping blindly and uncaring from a natural flute
Saying, “keep combined sunlight gathered at the end of the mind”
Therein with you, I felt this buoyancy beyond this archetype
Expansiveness, to my credit, hopeless youth undoing refreshing cosmic feathers
Utterly remaining in place, roots and shards of light heathers
Roaring indefinite…excursion into earlier life, where stories begin

Shutting my eyes perceives the elegance of the great blue diamond
Enigmatic of what always is and will be
We know it lies bare where Deity’s ear will hear
With pearled music prophetic and marvelously electrifying
Vivid sonnets politely working their way on wing
Something of which affirms the world when sky darkens
Hence, all hedges then jump away
Where light becomes fairly noticed and shade clears the way
We face directly to the illumination of harbor and open sea
And listen for something, something of language to eat

There, in the poise of our essence waking to a familiar smell
Hands begin to feel the sacrament of dreaming Morning Pearls
Yet unborn, but whispering to come and witness
Entering a city within the soul, surrounding pastoral images
Within this sea, I’ve seen and felt the years at rest
Where we never loose the meaning which melodies ahead
Digesting a muse floating lofty over songs of the entire world
Marking an accumulation of colors of an island’s view unfurled
There the gestures spin and balance all poles
I own my part, finding iron blues, and properly coming home


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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2003-07-04 04:35 PM


I noticed that you use lots of big words...something I never accomplished...do you have a degree in English or writing...James
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2003-07-04 05:16 PM


LeeJ
Each time you sharpen your pencil to make a point, it gets smaller. LOL enjoyed.

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