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Apple Pie |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Apple Pie I had some apple pie this morn To greet and sweeten up the dawn I had it with a sip of mist That lingered from a dreams insist. And as horizon painted views That filled my eyes with blissful hues I rolled my tongue the apples sweet And took to heart the mornings treat. I stretched my body waking up Cried a cry just like a pup Lingered in a muses chide And smiled a smile I could not hide. The mixture of my wake and view And thought of wonders constant new Left me in a daze of sweet Delicious as the apples treat But apples have a dark side too The sweet is strictly up to you. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Love this, Sy...all my apples had peck holes, and are only good for the rabbits, birds and squirrels....but I think I'd like a slice of your pie...and a view with your muse!  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful morning read Sy! You're words leave me in awe.. as I sit here shaking my head.. wondering how you do this each and every morn. Have a happy and safe Fourth of July!  ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
But apples have a dark side too The sweet is strictly up to you. A wonderful verse. I love best the last couplet. I think I will be calling this to mind for a very long time. Smiling at you this morning! Patricia |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Morning Sy! An apple pie breakfast for the 4th! How cool!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Sorry about the sour apples I'll send you a sweet one. LOL  Nancy, And a happy 4th to you. Patricia Smiling at your reply, have a happy 4th of july. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Happy 4th of July, Dear Mr. T.! It is poems like this one that has made you the apple of my eye!  Luvvums, EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Duncan Well at least it wasn't crab apple. LOL Earth Angel, Don't know if Angels celebrate holidays, but if you do I saved you a piece of apple pie. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Oh, but the dark side is only cinnamon, so don't worry. I enjoyed this delight with my morning tea. Thank you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kahlil My pleasure, have a happy 4th. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Seymour - awww bless you for this. Another one for my library! Upliftingly delicious! Seeing as how you have already had pie this morning....there will be no treats straight away from me  Instead, could Randy please deliver me a little slice of that pie? Mmmmm. Thankyou!! hugs, Chris  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Seymour - loves dat apple pie, especially the ones from long ago... BC |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, I'll send him post haste. Bill, Got ya, have a happy 4th. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
So where's mine? *G* Aren't you going to share??? LOL That's okay... I'll feast on your words... and savor their sweetness. *S* I enjoyed this very much, Seymour... Happy 4th... I've been thinking of last year... hugs to you and Isabel! *S* |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
How beautiful you write, could perchance we have a little bit of vanilla ice cream with this apply pie? yummy! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Hi sweet we send hugs back and have a happy 4th, LeeJ vanilla you say It would be my pleasure I'll send Randy over with it. LOL |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I've said it before and I will say it again and again ... for it's as true as the handsome hairs on your chinny chin. You are the apple of my eye ... your poetry makes me high ... you're the crust of wisdom, the sage and spice of rhyme's sigh. No matter how you slice or dice it, you are a prophet & poet's poet ... and I wont rest until you and all of poetry land knows it.   *ww* |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
So very inspiring! Your apple pie is sweetened with wisdom. Thank you for your daily dose of beauty. Love, Margherita |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Well....Guess I'll have to go bake an apple pie so the aroma of apples and cinnamon will fill the morning mists of beauty. See Ya Bon-Bon |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy...apple pie...leave it to you.. for the sweet American thing to do! |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
apple pie ohhhhhhhhhhhh yesssssssssss,, you got me craving now... nicely written... A voice of honesty |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
QjQ Glad you enjoyed, I mean the apple pie of course. Martie love you too. Bonnie, That's a wonderful idea. Margherita You are welcome and have a happy 4th JM, I'm so glad you said chinny chin. The rest is gone or pretty thin. WWRS |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Well said, my friend....well said. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ratleader, Thank you my friend and a happy 4th to you. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vandana Thank you for the read and reply. |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
Mmmmm.... mjummie.... Neeraja |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
enjoyed the wisdom this late morning Seymour |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Neeraja I take it you like apple pie. passing, Glad you stopped by to read. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hey Seymour, I missed this one yesterday and this morning. I love apple pie and yur poetry, so you know I love this. I like that little surprise at the end, too... But apples have a dark side too The sweet is strictly up to you So, so true, my friend. I hope you had a good fourth!! Heart hugs  Ethel Heart hugs to you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel Thank you dear for the read and reply. |
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