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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2003-07-04 02:14 AM



As I was driving home from shopping, the sky turned grey, it was now raining,

My thoughts were only with you, the radio was playing our song, I held back tears, restraining,

I thought of you every second, every minute of the day, daydreaming, missing you, always looking at the clock, not wanting to stay,

As I count on my fingers, one, two, three, four, five, five hours always, five away from my time,

When I get home, I don't even pull off my shoes, I run to my computer and check the email, gifts, cards you have sent,

You know how much it makes me happy, you love to see me smile, so content, as I bake my apple pie, I smell it, thinking of you wanting to send it,

Wondering what you are doing, I look at the clock, and I count, one two, three, four, five,you are asleep, your quiet sleep,

Inside your jungle room full of animals, so alive
As I eat my apple pie, I want to be there asleep with you, by your side,I know your favorite is apple pie too!

Then I pull off my clothes, take a long hot bath, as I listen to music you suggested, I lay back and close my eyes, think of you, I feel peace, rested,

My thoughts are about your day, your dreams, the poems you have penned, my thoughts about you, they make me laugh and grin,

When I think about you, I miss your voice, your wit, your conversation, your love , charm and excitement,

All throughout my day, there were signs of you speaking to me, the radio, pictures on cards of couples, goldenroses,

a tree bark, rain, people riding their bikes, a bear, a fox, just in everything, you are there, this is delightment,

It is now close to 12:00 midnight, no more rain, as I play my angel cd music, I compose and let my heart bleed on paper all it contains,

Gifts, heart gifts are the most precious ones you'll remember, gifts handmade, from a hearts deep surrender,

As I lay down in my bed upon my silken sheets, I look at the clock, close my eyes, and I count one, two, three, four, five,

For you it is now 7:00 a.m. your world, your day is just beginning, while my day is near its ending,

Always in my dreams there are no clocks to separate us , nor boundaries, or time, I'm with you, in our world of love, poetry and rhyme,

One, two, three, four, five,.......

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (07-05-2003 07:03 AM).]

© Copyright 2003 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
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1 posted 2003-07-04 04:49 AM


one....i love you for your looks...two...i love you for your mind....three.....i love you for your words....four.. i love you for your kindness.....five ...i love you for being you....thank you for the lovely poems my sweet....

love Goldenrose.xxx


JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2003-07-04 07:47 AM


This is lovely Romantic Heart...James
Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
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3 posted 2003-07-04 08:48 AM


Excellent...very creative and beautiful.
Eric

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2003-07-04 11:38 AM


I not only enjoy the poems that you and Goldenrose write, I enjoy reading the replies you write to each other!

Warm hugs,
EA

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