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littlewing
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0 posted 2003-07-04 12:18 PM


Blue ice
nestled
ancient monoliths
loom
a vale
for me
to see
mirrored reflection
of sky and sea
crystal sliver of peace
embracing me
As I plunge
uncharted water

I am her daughter

[This message has been edited by littlewing (07-04-2003 01:35 AM).]

© Copyright 2003 Sue Eckam - All Rights Reserved
Jason Lyle
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With my darkling
1 posted 2003-07-04 12:22 PM


I like this Sue, a vivid picture you painted.

Jason

passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-07-04 02:22 AM


reminds me of my daughter
Margherita
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3 posted 2003-07-04 06:20 AM


Very intense and beautiful write ..... fantastic poetry.
Love, Margherita

inkedgoddess
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4 posted 2003-07-04 07:13 AM


very spiritual and timely - filled with light

i am her daugher, too

Ericc
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5 posted 2003-07-04 08:49 AM


Your words always hold the hint of a greater mystery. Leaving me wanting to dive in farther.
Eric

catalinamoon
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6 posted 2003-07-04 09:00 AM


I like the way you did this. Very smooth and lovely.
Sandra

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7 posted 2003-07-04 09:13 AM


Perfectly lovely Sue!
Enjoyed this so very much this sunny morn.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
   you haven't been listening.~

Patricia
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8 posted 2003-07-04 10:06 AM


Just beautiful!  

Patricia

Earth Angel
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9 posted 2003-07-04 10:09 AM


I loved your poem--and Eric's reply! That's ditto for me!

Loves 'n hugs,
EA

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
10 posted 2003-07-04 10:36 AM


As I plunge
uncharted water

...sounds familiar...love the way you presented it.
hugs
M

Nightshade
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just out of reach
11 posted 2003-07-04 10:50 AM


Sue - just remember to come up for air! Wonderful write. Chris

"Said you'd give me light...
...but you never told me about the fire."

~Stevie Nicks~  
      

    

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
12 posted 2003-07-04 10:59 AM


littlewing - and a daughter with one lovely smile...

BC

LeeJ
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13 posted 2003-07-04 11:11 AM


How beautiful!!!!!
JamesMichael
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14 posted 2003-07-04 04:29 PM


Silky...James
Martie
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15 posted 2003-07-04 04:36 PM


littlewing...there is a lovely feeling to this, touched with spirit.
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16 posted 2003-07-04 04:56 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Sue, this is beautiful, sweet friend, you truly are nthe water's daughter as we are all sons and daughters to the Mother! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Aenimal
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17 posted 2003-07-04 09:19 PM


Argh! I thought I'd responded to this. I still have to give you my interpretation though I'm sure it's off i just captured a feeling for something through these beautiful images
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18 posted 2003-07-05 06:26 AM


Beautiful words Sue.....i like it a lot


Goldenrose.

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19 posted 2003-07-05 06:51 AM


Thanks again sue..

Goldenrose.

[This message has been edited by Goldenrose (07-05-2003 08:13 AM).]

littlewing
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20 posted 2003-07-05 01:48 PM


Thank you Jason, ahhh if you could see the picture I was looking at . . .
thank you

Dixie - what a nice thought - glad it did for you thank you

Thanks Margherita . . . means so much from you - you know that thank you

Michele - yes . .  you are
thank you

Eric - what a beautiful response!  Dive in please . . . thank you

Sandra - wow - thank you so much

Thanks Patricia - like to see you here

Thank you Linda - I have missed reading you - havent been online as much as I was

Maureen - sounds familiar ahaha yes I bet it does thank you

Chris, I use scuba gear . . . thank you

Bill - now what am I to say to that?  You always leave such a beautiful response for me - always making that smile brighter
thank you Bill

Thank you Lee!

Thank you James, silky - I like that

Martie - spirit indeed . . . glad you can see that - thank you

Noah - you always hit it right on the nose -always always reading further into the words - yep you got it and thank you

Raph - I doubt very highly your interpretation is off . . . making me smile knowing something I wrote left you with such thoughts thank you
xxoo

Hey Phil. thank you TWICE lol
I am glad you enjoyed

Thanks guys
xxoo    

Ceinwyn
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21 posted 2003-07-07 09:41 AM


unfortunately I'm my mother's daughter....I forgave but doesn't mean I still have to love her or like her...you have a way with words you know this by now!!

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Thomas119gold
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22 posted 2003-07-07 01:06 PM


Nice write
littlewing
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23 posted 2003-07-07 02:04 PM


Thanks Kris, but yes . . . you are a daughter of Mother Earth indeed

Thank you Thomas!

Thanks guys
xxoo

dreambuilder
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caddyshack
24 posted 2003-07-08 06:42 PM


reminded me of Yosemite
& many other memories

nature unifies the mind, body, & soul
back to where it began
where we gain insight & understanding
with such ease that it makes us realize
we are one

. . . all that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream  . . .

littlewing
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25 posted 2003-07-09 01:33 AM


Thank you Mike
You are so sweet to me
Yes we are all one indeed
thank you
xxoo

hoot_owl_rn
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26 posted 2003-07-09 08:12 PM


lovely
littlewing
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27 posted 2003-07-10 01:34 AM


Thank you hoot - is so good to see you reading me
xxoo

Soleil Noir
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28 posted 2003-07-10 10:36 AM



Excellent, Sue, in the capture
of understanding
even in the chaos of life.

Ringo
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Saluting with misty eyes
29 posted 2003-07-10 12:40 PM


This is absolutely awesome. Great job.

We see the light of those
Who find the world has passed them by
Too late to save a dream from growing cold...

vandana
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30 posted 2003-07-10 02:16 PM


enjoyed
Midnitesun
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Gaia
31 posted 2003-07-10 02:24 PM


How did I miss replying to this?
Especially since I've read it twice.


uncharted waters
my kind of travel

littlewing
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32 posted 2003-07-11 07:46 PM


Soleil - thank you so much!

Brad - thank you

Thanks V!

LOL Kacy - yes they are indeed

thanks guys
xxoo

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