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Open Poetry #27

go where you will

TasteOfOctober
Member

since 2003-06-24

Posts 94

0 posted 2003-07-03 11:50 PM

Go Where You Will

Go where you will
Your'e in my heart
I'll follow
Bones crack before they break
But **** is hard to swallow.
I said I love you,
I didn't lie
Your'e in my heart
I swallow.
Go where you will...
I will always follow.

The only difference between the creative and the conformists is that the creative will not be conquered and the conformists already are.

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

1 posted 2003-07-04 12:01 PM

Good, but I think you meant "you're"

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

TasteOfOctober
Member

since 2003-06-24

Posts 94

2 posted 2003-07-04 12:22 PM

wouldnt doubt it.

The only difference between the creative and the conformists is that the creative will not be conquered and the conformists already are.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-07-04 02:40 AM

yeah, I can relate a lot

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2003-07-05 07:55 PM

There is no truth in lies, and your straight forward approach is to be admired.
But those asterisks are hard to swallow.
(they're gonna get you every time)

Well done good poet~

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