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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2003-07-03 07:26 PM




this pen
is a sieve
of jumbled words
crescendoing  like
dominos about to  F
                    A
                      L
                        L

sometimes writing caligraphy
                    
othertimes the dribble of scrawl................


* is crescendoing a word? *


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mirror man
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1 posted 2003-07-03 07:35 PM


crescendoing is definitely a word.  I mean, it must be, you're using it.  Also it fits very well with what you mean.  Enjoyed all the words.

[This message has been edited by mirror man (07-04-2003 08:41 AM).]

Kaoru
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2 posted 2003-07-03 08:39 PM


Awesome write, loved the placement of words..
Aenimal
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3 posted 2003-07-03 08:42 PM


Just flash your poetic license to anyone who asks if it isn't, no idea myself and it works well.
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4 posted 2003-07-04 01:03 AM


Yes -- and it's on a Double Word Score...


Don't I know this feeling well! Nicely put.

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littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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5 posted 2003-07-04 01:09 AM


if it isnt a word . .  it is now
and Goddd I feel like this . . .
xxoo

passing shadows
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6 posted 2003-07-04 02:12 AM


I'll backyaup, if you say it is, then it is!


Bill Charles
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7 posted 2003-07-04 11:02 AM


inkedgoddess - of course it's a word, someone from brookyln can use any word they wish, even if it's not actually a word?

BC

bklynboy
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florida
8 posted 2003-07-04 02:10 PM


Its a word but not one anyone from brooklyn would use. We aint that educated.
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