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inhersilentway
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fl, us

0 posted 2003-07-03 06:51 PM



i want to write
      and write
      and write
      and fall in love

i have no need for these sadistic worries
lingering,
clinging to my thoughts like they were dangling
                                        entangled in my mess of hair and whispering
           in my ear.

water to sky, i could either float or fly;

fall or drown...

between the two of you, i come down.



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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
1 posted 2003-07-03 06:59 PM


lovely!
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just out of reach
2 posted 2003-07-03 07:17 PM


Enjoyed this. Chris

"Said you'd give me light...
...but you never told me about the fire."

~Stevie Nicks~  
      

    

mirror man
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3 posted 2003-07-03 07:25 PM


Yes, this is very nice.
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