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rm711
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0 posted 2003-07-03 06:22 PM



Walk in and right back out
Remember me sometimes not
But when it’s all done and over
You’ll remember who I am

Because I’m still standing
Right where you all left me
At each turn
I’m still right there
Whether it matters to you or not
This is my world
And in it I’ll do what the hell I want

Yesterday
You wanted me to throw it all away
You didn’t care anymore
Apparently
But then you had the cheek
To come crawling back to me
You were hurt and crying
I cared

I’m still standing
Where do you want me
Call me
I’m there
I don’t care if you hurt me
I don’t mind if you make me cry
This is my world
And in it I’ll do what the hell I want

Tomorrow morning
Like every weekend
Something happening
To stop it feeling like the end
And it’s ok now
The weeks kinda blurred
But I forget nothing
I remembered every word

Because I’m still standing
Right where you all left me
At each turn
I’m still right there
Whether it matters to you or not
This is my world
And in it I’ll do what the hell I want.

I just want something,One thing,Can’t you let me have someone,Anyone,Just for me,And this is what I seem to be,To everybody,Your last resort

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1 posted 2003-07-03 07:46 PM


"I’m still standing
Where do you want me
Call me
I’m there
I don’t care if you hurt me
I don’t mind if you make me cry
This is my world
And in it I’ll do what the hell I want"

Great lines..Great write! Enjoyed

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