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Shadows of Time
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since 2003-06-24
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0 posted 2003-07-03 11:55 AM


-little different from the usual, but hey music has this effect on me-

Vibrant strings gliding to and fro
Pulsating air filling the room
Darkness encompassing everything
Twirling, spinning lights
Liquid neon florescent colors
Dance into my mind
Abstract shapes spin around
Spilling across the walls
A soothing, comforting feeling
As the mind comes to peace with the world
Then the adrenaline starts
And the next level of nirvana is reached
As symphony and metal merge
And form this liquid metal
Which is ambrosia for my spirit

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eor
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since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
1 posted 2003-07-03 03:58 PM


very nice ode...

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

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