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Soddy Journal – 1875 – Morning poem
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Soddy Journal – 1875 – Morning poem |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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This is summer, then early dawn rays shimmering upon the cottonwood leaves dance underneath the southern breath of a fresh break of wind Leaves glimmering hello to sol sun, dancing their way in full reel, escorting the day with red-winged blackbird song Willows and olive trees join in dip, bend, sway, cattails hold the choir all dressed in splendid black epaulets of red in blaze Sing to me the morning song before summer’s passion melts my soul before noon finds me napping beneath the oak on the hill. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sing to me the morning song before summer’s passion melts my soul before noon finds me napping beneath the oak on the hill. Karilea, I find myself napping a lot around noon time.... Could it be because I stay up so late? LOL  Hugs  Ethel |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Sing to me the morning song before summer’s passion melts my soul before noon finds me napping beneath the oak on the hill." This has to be one of the most beautiful verses I have read. Talk about lazy hazy summer days! Made me want to grab a book and run outside and read under a tree. Lovely lovely Karilea... ~Morning Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I check in this morning and look what treasure I find...another soddy, for my library  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Willows and olive trees join in dip, bend, sway, cattails hold the choir all dressed in splendid black epaulets of red in blaze Oh, this is such a beautiful picture you have painted for us with your words Karilea. Thankyou for this. hugs, Chris |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
K, the images are incredible, the flow perfect. I love the words and the feel. There you have it...I guess I better venture out this morning before the afternoon sun calls me to nap. Just beautiful! Into the library with this treasure! Patricia |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"Sing to me the morning song before summer’s passion melts my soul before noon finds me napping beneath the oak on the hill." Seriously, I am in need of help...I read the last two lines and thought it meant death...what is wrong with me? Anyway, it was beautiful. Susan C. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
Leaves glimmering hello to sol sun, dancing their way in full reel, escorting the day with red-winged blackbird song these lines were very outstanding and brought out the vision to me. all i can say is one beautiful write of poetry.. A voice of honesty |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you are fabulous at writing nature  |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Twas directed to this gem this morning. And a gem it is. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
I love this! Eric |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Sing to me the morning song before summer’s passion melts my soul before noon finds me napping beneath the oak on the hill. Sigh Karilea this is beautifully romantic. Keeper! Maree |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
adding to my library. heh got excited. |
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