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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-07-03 06:14 AM


Sweet Heart

I like the way
she takes my arms
and wraps them
all around her
like she needs
my touch.

And the way
she lays back
into my arms like
she totally
trust me.

And when I tell her,
sweetheart I love you,
she laughs and smiles
and she gives me a
sweet kiss that
touches my heart.
That's why I call
her sweet heart.

JamesLee
July03
2003
JagiyaNa
SarongHa


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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2003-07-03 07:22 AM


very enjoyable read
Patricia
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since 2003-04-06
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Missouri
2 posted 2003-07-03 08:48 AM


Very sweet.  Good images, James!

Patricia

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2003-07-03 08:58 AM


Very nice and oh so sweet.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
   you haven't been listening.~

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
4 posted 2003-07-03 09:35 AM


Beautiful and sweet. I love the element of trust you inserted.
Love, Margherita

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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5 posted 2003-07-03 04:28 PM


Thank you LeeJ, Patricia, Enchantress and Margherita for the nice responses...James
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