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Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
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0 posted 2003-07-03 05:55 AM


Sweeping across the savannah, heards of zebra,wildebeast and antelope pass us by on their migratory route,i see only your smiling face.

Stalking Cheatahs try to catch Thompson gazeles,as we watch from a car.
Beauty and death together,you look beautiful in the african sun, wearing a blouse of delicate white lace.

Sitting, sipping sweet tea later in our tents, we watch the sun go down across the plains, as a Leopard descends from his Accacia tree lair and begins the night hunting.

Late evening passes to deep night, as the myriad of stars hove into view above us.
In the soft moonlight you look simply stunning.

Sweet love do we make beneath the stars of Africa, you so perfect in every way.
Laying looking from our tent at the cool midnight blue sky, it is heaven, nowhere else would i rather be but by your side.

Please take my love forever,i want you till days of our life are inseperable, to breathe the same air as you, to always touch your sweet face when morning is new.
Our love i want to be clear to everyone, not hide.

early morning on the plains,we wake and wash.
Elephants are by the river as we watch them wild and truly free.
You wrap your loving arms around me.

So in love am i with you, i will never love anybody in the same way, ever.
My life is meant for just one...thee.



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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2003-07-03 06:00 AM


"My life is meant for just one...thee."
Really like this line...James

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2003-07-03 07:32 AM


Please take my love forever,i want you till days of our life are inseperable, to breathe the same air as you, to always touch your sweet face when morning is new.
Our love i want to be clear to everyone, not hide.

Beautiful!!!!!

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2003-07-04 12:28 PM


Within each poem, I can see another layer of your heart being peeled away so I can view the core....this was so sweet, beautiful,lovely,I ccould go on and on...but you know I am kind of bias!

This my Golden Amber king was truely one of my favorites!

So when are we going to Africa?

xxxx Your Vermilion Queen


[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (07-04-2003 02:22 AM).]

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2003-07-04 02:20 AM


awesome scene
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