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0 posted 2003-07-02 10:54 PM




Silver crescent moon
Fireflies greeting you in blink
Morse code to beacon



© Copyright 2003 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-07-02 10:55 PM


I love the middle line so much, great imagery! Great write!
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2 posted 2003-07-02 11:01 PM


gee   ~fireflys~  i have not seen in years this brings back many memory's,

nice write  "K"

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3 posted 2003-07-02 11:02 PM


Karilea...Could you send me a firefly...I've never seen one...but we do see the same moon.  
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4 posted 2003-07-02 11:07 PM


Oh this is lovely...
and it seems as though they are sending morse  code!  
~Hugs~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
   you haven't been listening.~

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5 posted 2003-07-02 11:30 PM


Martie's never seen a firefly????  That's downright sad!     
Haven't seen many myself this year, wonder where the buggers can be??

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6 posted 2003-07-03 02:28 AM


a wonderful July evening it is
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7 posted 2003-07-03 08:07 AM


...Wonder what they're saying...

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8 posted 2003-07-03 08:15 AM


K, I love this!  Macy (my four year old) and I were in the backyard last week.  She was running 'round in circles..."Mommy, catch it, catch it!"  Fireflies!  Wait until I tell her about this.  She will love the notion those little guys are talking to her.  Then, of course, I will make up some rhyme and tell her fireflies know their poetry!

Smiling at you!

Patricia

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9 posted 2003-07-03 08:28 AM


I saw all of this last night...you captured it beautifully..

believe in what your heart feels...

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10 posted 2003-07-03 10:06 AM


Oh, I love this Karilea. I have only seen them a few times....and it thrilled me to no end. hugs, Chris

"Said you'd give me light...
...but you never told me about the fire."

~Stevie Nicks~  
      

    

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11 posted 2003-07-03 10:44 AM


How utterly soft, delicate and beautifully written.  Thank you for sharing.
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